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by Clark
The gods have chosen their representatives. The war will begin soon. The only problem is that the gods' chosen can't stop fighting long enough to be of any use. List of chapters
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I give it 3.5 stars.
Keep writing! Feel free to check out my book "Safe"!
I really enjoyed reading this - I will come back for more when I've the time. It's well written and I love the dragons. If I could ask you to have a look at my own dragon book - I know it's cheeky doing this - but I'd love to get an opinion on it. It's called Atheris: Battle Cry, and so far no one has left any feedback.
Once again, I'd like to say how much I liked your work! Cheers x
Enjoyed what I've read. Very descriptive. Liked your description of the dragons. Nice job.
I find your plot very interesting. Of course, it needs work, but didn't all great writing need tons of work at one point? That's why you are here.
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By the way, could you please check out my book War of Darkness book 1 - Prophecies of The King, any constructive criticism would be great.