The Time Walkers
GenreFiction / Romance
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Monday, 29 June 2009
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(6 ratings)
Read by:33 different readers
 

"I can travel through time?" I was having a hard time grasping this
"Yes young one!"
"No,you must have me confus-"
"No,you ARE a Time Walker whether you like it or not!" Her voice sounded raspy and dry.

Zaylee Toms is a sort-of normal girl until she is taken into the future, told to be a Time Walker, given a task to save the planet, and of course your daily things. Try not to be killed and run from love.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Just a Normal School Day
Ch. 2 Visiting Dad
Ch. 3 I'm a WHAT?
Ch. 4 Dead Bodies and Boys
Ch. 5 Transformed
Ch. 6 Test Traveling

Comments

 
- Lany Friday, 21 August 2009
I like this, your character has a very clear voice, I thik maybe you should add in a little more description though. Keep adding,
Lany
Thanks for reading mine!
 
Stevie-Lynne Thursday, 20 August 2009
Hey Brooke!

lol there isn't really much i need to review so yeah... haha well anyways try to get rid of your writers block so i can print chapter 6 and add it to the book! XD Oh yeah! don't forget to wake up at 10:00am tomorrow for the picnik!!
 
Stevie-Lynne Tuesday, 18 August 2009
awesome book bcm!!!
 
Stevie-Lynne Tuesday, 18 August 2009
LOVE IT!!!!
Scarlet Blaze Tuesday, 18 August 2009
The idea seems to muc h like the timetravelers wife, but it's good anyway!

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