Counting Days On The Backs Of Our Hands
GenreDrama / Fiction
Age Rating:PG
Submitted:Thursday, 25 June 2009
Star rating:
 
(3 ratings)
Read by:171 different readers
 

" The teacher walked in and told Leon and the rest of the boys to sit down and stop flinging spit balls at vthe back of my neck. She looked at me, and a wave of sympathy passed by her face. She had probably been talking about me in the teacher''s room, laughing at the girl who tried to kill herself. Who was probably insane and who had just gotten an A+ on her mid-terms. My science teacher had taken me aside and had explained to me why the human body wants to destroy itself. She made me sound like a monster. Like a phsyco killer who killed everything in it''s path. But the truth was...I was the only thing in my path. And I''m set to destroy it."

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Virginia
Ch. 2 Down Come The Walls Where I Was Standing, Close Call
Ch. 3 These scars look farmiliar?

Comments

 
OminousCloudInTheDistance Friday, 30 October 2009
I think that this book could really be good, if you just draw it out. Maybe you could start explaining why she is doing this, or start dropping more hints. I am interested, and hope you keep writing. Good job, and please check out my book!
 
Liverpool Friday, 17 July 2009
Oh! I really like it. Those people from school are assholes! xD
 
Miu A. Oyanagi Thursday, 16 July 2009
Yeah, I'm lost. Like honestly, well written, feel the emotion but no offense, but I'm missing the point. I would suggest (unless you're gonna put it in later) having her explain what went wrong or why the sudden change to "Man fuck this, I'm just gonna die now," attitude when she's like, thinking back to other things, yeah. Just a suggestion.
 
Miu A. Oyanagi Thursday, 16 July 2009
Okay, well, I give this four stars on account of, it's well written (although you got some spellin gand grammar checks needed, yeah) but I guess I'm still trying to figure out the "I must take my life for no real reason" thing.

*reads on*

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