The Seven Swords of Elora
GenreFantasy / Sci-Fi
Age Rating:PG
Submitted:Friday, 21 December 2012
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(6 ratings)
Read by:327 different readers
 

The Dark Elves of Marda in the south, try to rule the land in shadow and desecrate the natural life. The only hope now, as darkness sneaks back into the world, are the Seven Swords of Elora hidden in a part of the land unknown. A band of seven elves go in search of the swords traveling through the magical land of Alloriand.

Jack Pagliante

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Rumors From Afar
Ch. 2 Dangers From Below
Ch. 3 At the Gates of Erandor
Ch. 4 Answers in the Dark
Ch. 5 The Valley of Hiim
Ch. 6 The Silver Council
Ch. 7 Under the Mountain
Ch. 8 The Weir
Ch. 9 The Elves of Nelldir
Ch. 10 The Seven Swords of Elora

Comments

 
Bronze Thursday, 4 September 2014
You really need to work on your title page description. When all you typed was 'adventure far and wide', with no punctuation or capitalization, it was an instant throw off. I wouldn't even consider a book worth reading if the writer can't give a good catch-line. This is vital but easy to fix. Fix your catch lines! They need to be the best they can be. That line is what catches your readers, draws them in, makes them want to read. It's the difference between someone picking up your book or leaving it unopened on the shelf.
 
Esmerine Ivy Tuesday, 26 August 2014
I love Lord of the Rings and Tolkien so this caught my eye right away. I like this a lot.
 
Eva Penn Tuesday, 13 August 2013
very tokien-ish :) to me thats a good thing since i love lotr. i like it so far!
 
Charly Froerer Sunday, 10 February 2013
I really like this. I didn't finish it, but what I read was really descriptive.
 
J. B. Hawkins Sunday, 3 February 2013
While this book has a very familiar writing style, it kind of stands out on it's own. I could see it being the next "stand-alone" story after 'The Hobbit' in the LOTR franchise. Still, It was an excellent read, and I can't wait to read your other submissions.

If I was to have a criticism, it would be that I think you could have expanded the ending a bit. It seemed to end abruptly.

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