The Arkanist
GenreFantasy / Sci-Fi
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Saturday, 3 November 2012
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(17 ratings)
Read by:487 different readers
 

(not completed/edited)

(and don't bother with the chapter numbers. I don't feel like going through the whole thing again and redoing them)


In a land built upon the foundations of magic, darkness has defeated the light. The ancient hero set on a pedestal of prophetic victory was killed, and evil flooded into the realm in a great rush. Runir sleeps in an eternal night, the sky and sun veiled by crimson mist and black clouds. The people are slaves to darkness, living under the tyrannous rule of the Oppressive One. Rebellion is unthinkable, but not dead... It lives.


Jack Pagliante 2013 All Rights Reserved
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List of chapters

Ch. 1 Prologue
Ch. 2 The Unknown
Ch. 3 Options
Ch. 4 The Temple of Qvas
Ch. 5 The Ashwood
Ch. 6 Secrets
Ch. 6 The Rebellion
Ch. 7 Hope
Ch. 8 The Mountains of Varrin
Ch. 9 The Red Hand
Ch. 10 The Mist
Ch. 10 Prisoner
Ch. 11 The Escape
Ch. 12 The Divide
Ch. 13 Tarar
Ch. 14 The Lord of Shaar
Ch. 15 Light
Ch. 16 The Zeian
Ch. 17 The Secret Hall
Ch. 17 The Hall of the Sun King
Ch. 18 Revenge
Ch. 19 The Garden of Bones
Ch. 20 The City of Serpents
Ch. 20 The Ruins of Amardros
Ch. 21 The Lord of Spices
Ch. 22 The Black Priest

Comments

Avi SO Friday, 21 June 2013
The chapter in my eyes is a little too long with too much detail and small things that it gets boring in my eyes, just my two cents
Avi SO Wednesday, 19 June 2013
I don't know if you want grammatical corrections but Lor and Loden should be capitalized and through the story there are letters mistakenly capitalized.
Avi SO Wednesday, 19 June 2013
Just a question, what era like time is this? Is there technology like lifts and skyscrapers or is it more ancient like?
Avi SO Wednesday, 19 June 2013
Oh, sorry, one more thing, in the middle there is a bit of dialogue which is not quotasized
Avi SO Wednesday, 19 June 2013
Great story! A-lot of detail, just if I could just point out two things.
One, the first line I think is superfluous, that can be inferred from later in the chapter, and my grandmother, who was a legal editor told me that unlike in movies, you can;t write in books "X time later", it should be a real sentence.
Great job, I'll continue reading!

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