The Seeker
GenreLiterary Fiction / Adventure
Age Rating:PG
Submitted:Monday, 14 May 2012
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(4 ratings)
Read by:243 different readers
 

Jake is just your average boy- but he doesn't have a dad, and his mom is an alcoholic. So what's a boy to do? Run away.
Jake runs away with the hopes of finding a new, free life... But is that what he gets?

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Drunk. Again.

Comments

Jordan Yates Thursday, 17 May 2012
_Shufufle_- I had StevenCash design it. I don't know how he did it, but feel free to message him and ask :)
Pin3apple- I considered the a-or-the argument, but there were most likely multiple chairs in the room and I wasn't sure which would make more sense. :) Also, I don't normally swear in my stories but I felt it fit the character. As I develop the story, I may edit out some of the swearing if it doesn't have the effect I want. :)
Thank you both! :)
Oh, and thanks Tanger-T, as well :)
Jordan Yates Thursday, 17 May 2012
_Shufufle_- I had StevenCash design it. I don't know how he did it, but feel free to message him and ask :)
Pin3apple- I considered the a-or-the argument, but there were most likely multiple chairs in the room and I wasn't sure which would make more sense. :) Also, I don't normally swear in my stories but I felt it fit the character. As I develop the story, I may edit out some of the swearing if it doesn't have the effect I want. :)
Thank you both! :)
Oh, and thanks Tanger-T, as well :)
 
Steven Cash Thursday, 17 May 2012
Good job, Jude. And thanks for letting me do your book cover!
 
_ShufufleXD_ Wednesday, 16 May 2012
This is good! Uhh how did you do the book cover?
 
Pin3apple Wednesday, 16 May 2012
Loved your story, just had some few suggestions that may help.
In the begininning, wen u said, a chair, wouldn't it b better with "the"
Maybe add a little bit more details, which don't worry, i have trouble doing that too. Nice job! Happy writing!!!

Btw, if u could give me advice on my books, that'd b great thnx!
... One more thing, try saying less bad words; makes ur story different from those teenage styles

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