Journey to Light (Part I of the High Duties of Pacia)
GenreFantasy / Sci-Fi
Age Rating:PG
Submitted:Wednesday, 28 March 2012
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Read by:432 different readers
 

Imagine a world populated with the entire spectrum of humanity. Good people, ordinary citizens of small cities, fear attack from brutal and powerful men called the Zafiri. Great Cities are divided between the decadence and splendor of the wealthy and the deprivation and squalor of the poor. An organization of women known as the Sistéria is widely known but little understood. Its members have the talent to use ‘effect,’ the ability the read and control the emotions of others, and sometimes to have prescient visions of the future. And people in Pàçia, a land with an ancient history set apart from the rest of the world, were once gentle, kind and peaceful. Their leaders did not have the power to rule or command; they had duties to fulfill – High Duties which for millennia helped make the world a better place. That is, until twelve years earlier when the Zafiri invaded Pàçia with a massive army, capturing the beautiful city Abbelôn and crushing the gentle people. Now the rest of the world is threatened by more war and destruction.

Then an extraordinary young woman named Sistére Graice crosses paths with a man unlike any she has met before. Her ‘effect,’ her ability to control everyone else, has no power over him. Known only as Holder, the man has no memory and doesn’t know his own identity. Graice’s mentor Sybille hires him as a guide for a journey she and Graice must make, partly so they can keep him close until they discover his secret. As they travel, Graice tries to help Holder recover his memory. While he is in a drugged sleep, she ‘sees’ into his mind and discovers small fragments of past events, all involving a beautiful golden-haired woman. When he wakes, Holder still does not remember these scenes but Graice gains clues about his identity. The women now know who he is (or was) but do not tell him. He must remember on his own for the recovery to succeed.

In the backwaters of the land meanwhile, a boy age thirteen travels with his aunt (his sole surviving relative) hiding from enemy spies by moving constantly and using false names and disguises. When he complains that he knows nothing about his parents, she reveals his family name and bits of its history. Later, she gives him an amulet and implies he will wear it someday. It’s an Emblem of High Duty, she says.

A girl named Caelia, also thirteen, hides from the same enemy. She lives with her parents and many other refugees in a cavern where her father searches for secrets of the Anziên people, a civilization which collapsed 3,500 years earlier. Named after a legendary heroine from antiquity, Caelia is unusually bright and mature for her age and her shining red-gold hair sets her apart. Girls with that hair color are born once in a millennium, people say, and everyone in the community loves Caelia. At this point, even the girl herself doesn’t know why they do. When she wants to leave the cave on an adventure, everybody objects but no one can say no to her. She gets her way and departs with a trading expedition.

Along their separate paths, Graice and Holder are attacked by a monstrous creature; outlaws kidnap Caelia and drag her into a forest wilderness; and enemy soldiers close in on the boy, causing him to flee for his life. Not only do all survive but the encounters also reveal hidden secrets. The story continues in Return of the High Protector: Part II of the High Duties of Pàçia.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 0 In the beginning
Ch. 1 The Little Boy
Ch. 2 Graice and Holder
Ch. 3 Graice and Holder Pt, 2
Ch. 4 Graice and Holder Pt. 3
Ch. 5 Graice and Holder Pt. 4
Ch. 6 The Boy
Ch. 7 Caelia
Ch. 8 Rafe and Belo
Ch. 9 Brief Summary of the Rest of the Story

Comments

 
Ann Denton Monday, 8 July 2013
Nice read! The story flows nicely.
 
Megane Thursday, 13 September 2012
I've only read the first two chapters of this book and it's so GREAT!! I love it!!! Happy writing!!
~Megane :)

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Aastha Tuesday, 11 September 2012
Really good book!
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-Aastha
 
Charly Froerer Sunday, 9 September 2012
So far so good! :)
-Charly
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Amelie Fox Monday, 20 August 2012
I think that this is...wonderful. Truly, it is. It flows so smoothly. I love it. I absolutely love it. Amazing work, my friend. Absolutely amazing.

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