Deadly Ranks
GenreThriller / Young Adult
Age Rating:PG
Submitted:Monday, 25 May 2009
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(9 ratings)
Read by:284 different readers
 

Annabel is friendless. You cant blame her. When the Deadly Ranks, teenage murderers, join her in their group, shes estatic. But once in their group,shes exposed too a world of murder and evil. Where she had to kill her own parents.

Once your in, how do you get out? Can Annabel get out of the mess she created? Or will she DIE trying?

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Lonely
Ch. 2 I Hate Dinner
Ch. 3 Meet the Deadly Ranks
Ch. 4 Invited
Ch. 5 Dangerous
Ch. 6 You're In
Ch. 7 Kill Me
Ch. 8 Introduce Me
Ch. 9 Stacey Darling

Comments

 
E. C. Schroeder Saturday, 21 August 2010
Woah!! Very interesting twist to the plot!! But I do think it came a little too fast. I think the reader should get to know Annabell a little more. Details about her life, her likes and dislikes, how she feels about the people around her, etc. A twist this big shouldn't happen so soon in the store...just an observation. Great job, though!
 
E. C. Schroeder Saturday, 21 August 2010
How depressing, but well written. I do hope there's an absolution for this girl. One sentence that didn't sound quite right was: "If she did, Annabell wouldn't have written half the stuff she had written". You repeat the word 'written' and it sounds awkward. Maybe change it to something like "If she did, Annabell wouldn't have written half the stuff that was in there". And one more thing: the story starts out at a soccer game, but then it transitions to lunch hour. That was a little confusing, so maybe you should change that too. But other than that, the story's real good and I look forward to seeing what happens next.
Sunflower Saturday, 2 January 2010
WOW! I totally did NOT see that coming!!! i love the book so far! please keep writing!!!!!
 
naddie Thursday, 24 September 2009
wow oh my god this is so addicting, i love it! sometimes things go really quickly so you need to slow down and add more detail. please rate my stuff!
 
punk_princess Wednesday, 1 July 2009
Really good book - please add some more chapters!

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