Between the Lines
GenrePoetry / Young Adult
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Wednesday, 15 June 2011
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Adventures in the lives of everyone, this is a series of poems that are connected and not, in the never-ending web of life.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 A Lifetime
Ch. 2 Aware
Ch. 3 Behind Closed Doors
Ch. 4 Best Friends
Ch. 5 Unsheltered
Ch. 6 Believer
Ch. 7 Mislead
Ch. 8 Sweet Dreams
Ch. 9 Cold
Ch. 10 Lily
Ch. 11 Gray
Ch. 12 Ode to Her
Ch. 13 The Brush-Off
Ch. 14 Anatomy of a Girl
Ch. 15 King of the World
Ch. 16 Away
Ch. 17 Tonight
Ch. 18 Thin
Ch. 19 When Jesus Comes Again
Ch. 20 POPSICLES
Ch. 21 Sixteen
Ch. 22 Forever
Ch. 23 Family Reunion
Ch. 24 Kaleidoscope
Ch. 25 In Wonderland
Ch. 26 Homecoming
Ch. 27 Hang Up
Ch. 28 Ignite
Ch. 29 Betrayal
Ch. 30 Dysfunctional
Ch. 31 Guilt of a Cheater
Ch. 32 Collide
Ch. 33 Unaccompanied
Ch. 34 Box of Stars
Ch. 35 Can't go Home Again
Ch. 36 Confined
Ch. 37 Free Man
Ch. 38 Heaven
Ch. 39 Fly Away
Ch. 40 Lost and Found
Ch. 41 The Pack
Ch. 42 Window
Ch. 43 Promise
Ch. 44 Wish
Ch. 45 Dreamer
Ch. 46 Hannah

Comments

 
Jonah Kane Friday, 20 April 2012
this is really unique! Its great :)
 
Jordan Yates Sunday, 4 September 2011
You have really good ideas, and good wording, but the way you split up the lines makes the poem drag really oddly... Maybe reconsider where you cut your lines? It's a cool concept to cut them in the middle of a sentence, but you do it a bit too often... I usually cut them to make a point or emphasize something :) Just some ideas! Keep writing, definitely.
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