Chameleon Encounter
GenreLiterary Fiction / Adventure
Age Rating:G
Submitted:Thursday, 3 January 2008
Star rating:
 
(9 ratings)
Read by:356 different readers
 

A story for the reader who might revel in the possibility of time-leaps or time-warps, our accidental hero is Australian born Jack Dawson. A freelance writer who up to now has lived a quiet life in San Francisco with Helen, his American born wife. A freak storm strikes the San Francisco Bay area whilst Jack is up on a ladder adjusting a television antenna. Lightning strikes the ladder and the force sends him flying into a pool, although when he surfaces he finds himself in a pool complex in Mexico. His attemted return to the USA sparks an international fiasco at the border when he mysteriously disappears after discovering he can teleport himself anywhere. It becomes a race for time as government agencies are not the only ones who want to recruit him for his ability. Each vowing that if they can not get him, he must be eliminated.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 The Discovery (Rewritten 22 Mar 2009)
Ch. 2 Chameleon Creation
Ch. 3 Reality Hits Home
Ch. 4 Time to Recover
Ch. 5 Operation Condor

Comments

 
Danielle Evans Wednesday, 14 April 2010
This is so amazing! please write more!!
 
Danielle Evans Tuesday, 13 April 2010
Awesome!!!! :D
 
Danielle Evans Tuesday, 13 April 2010
This is amazing! :P
 
KML Monday, 29 March 2010
It moves a little too fast. Maybe you can find a way to weave the details in the beginning into the story itself? As a reader, it always gets my attention if things like the characters' looks are shown, not told.
But I like the writing, and I'm a sucker for description. Keep it up; the plot sounds fun and the story sounds like it's off to a good start.

^peace^
 
Eden Craig Friday, 19 December 2008
hmmm.... needs work i think.

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