He's Back
GenreYoung Adult / Non Fiction
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Saturday, 14 May 2011
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(6 ratings)
Read by:290 different readers
 

He's back. & there's nothing I can do to stop him from doing it again.

Layla isnt the victim, she's just curious of what is happening, wondering if it could be true. Wondering if this man is doing things to her step-sister, this man, who is her father.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Respect.
Ch. 2 The First Day
Ch. 3 History
Ch. 4 On The Wall
Ch. 5 Kids By Blood
Ch. 6 Suspicious
Ch. 7 I Dont Know
Ch. 8 Fight And Make-Up Sex?
Ch. 9 Worse
Ch. 10 Are You'se Finished Yet?

Comments

 
pursuitofstories Sunday, 18 December 2011
Oh, and another thing, it's probably just a typo: my brother dillon should be capital.

Just trying to help, no offence meant.
 
pursuitofstories Sunday, 18 December 2011
I think it's good but the chapters are way too short if you wanted to go on and publish this. I understand you're writing about your own life, but try and extend chapters so the reader can get a good feel for the story.
bookworm922x Thursday, 26 May 2011
This would make a great book/story but your writing in as if your telling a story to a friend. And your chapters are way too short. Also, you need more detail. If just fixed those things, it would be great. It's horrible that you had to go through this, though. It hits home to me because my mother was sexually abused by her half-sisters' dad.
 
*Roza* Wednesday, 25 May 2011
It's good, a bit odd, and really short. I'll check back in to read the rest later.
lost in thought Monday, 23 May 2011
this is good. all over the place but good. it's really horrible that you went through this. lots of kids go through this all the time and it's good your writing about it, but maybe tidy it up.

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