Surreal
GenreSci-Fi / Romance
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Saturday, 14 May 2011
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Read by:320 different readers
 

Zoe -- a girl that likes to run across rooftops and observe from afar -- has always wanted to break free of Haven, silent city, dark and mysterious. She hates that no one cares and she hates that she has to hide what she is. And then she meets Evan. Evan is a boy with a secret and a knack for finding hiding places.

Their meeting is only the catalyst for something bigger, much bigger than them and what they are. It brings a whole new world inside of Haven, with unimaginable things and people. It also brings the wrath of Gold, Haven's paranoid and murderous mayor. He will stop at nothing to get to Zoe and her secret -- a secret that could change the world as they know it.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 0 Prologue
Ch. 1 Chapter 1
Ch. 2 Chapter 2
Ch. 3 Chapter 3
Ch. 4 Chapter 4
Ch. 5 Chapter 5
Ch. 6 Chapter 6
Ch. 7 Chapter 7
Ch. 8 Chapter 8
Ch. 9 Chapter 9
Ch. 10 Chapter 10
Ch. 11 Chapter 11
Ch. 12 Chapter 12
Ch. 13 Chapter 13
Ch. 14 Chapter 14

Comments

Avalon Knight Friday, 10 February 2012
I'm loving this story so far. And I agree with Kelsey, the Maximum Ride books didn't have long chapters, so don't worry about it. It's not about the length, but the content.

I'll keep on reading because this is good. Could you read mine? I can always use more critiques. :)
 
Na<3mi B. Monday, 1 August 2011
ohmygoodNESS! I really like this! A very original idea and story line. Great job.
Kelsey dietrich Tuesday, 14 June 2011
First of all, if her birthday is on decmber 25th then there's know way that its been around 3 weeks since her change, and he hasn't had his yet .
Kelsey dietrich Tuesday, 14 June 2011
A dynamic have you read the maximum ride books? ;) they're written by a very well respected author, and the chapters are 3 pages at most.
 
Clara Daniels Monday, 16 May 2011
Woops. I didn't mean to submit that twice. :P FAIL!

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