His Advocate (Heroine Angel; renamed)
GenreYoung Adult / Spiritual
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Sunday, 8 May 2011
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(7 ratings)
Read by:637 different readers
 

All of a sudden, the hint of burning flesh filled Faye's nostrils. It was a lot stronger smelling than it was in the shower. Dakotah hissed and looked as if he were to lunge out of the kitchen and into the living room. Faye looked over at Blaike to see him sniffing the air as well.
"Are you barbecuing, Faye?" He asked, smiling.
"No, I'm not barbecuing... Unfortunately," It always made her wonder why humans smelled a hint of smoked hickory instead of burning flesh. She sighed and took his hand in hers, "Blaike, I need you to hide. Run into my bedroom and lock yourself in my bathroom and don't come out until I come for you... Okay?" Blaike opened his mouth to say something, but quickly shut it and sprinted into hiding.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Faye's Dream
Ch. 2 Blaike's Morning
Ch. 3 Faye's Assignment
Ch. 4 Faye's Enrollment
Ch. 5 Blaike's Rude Awakening
Ch. 6 First Day at School
Ch. 7 Blaike's Dream, A Reality
Ch. 8 Awkward Moments
Ch. 9 Faye's Help
Ch. 10 Blaike's Embarassement
Ch. 11 Her Confession
Ch. 12 His Curiousity
Ch. 13 Time Is Now
Ch. 14 Faye's Story
Ch. 15 A Day Without Faye
Ch. 16 War Time
Ch. 17 Frustration
Ch. 18 Sparks
Ch. 19 Trouble at Home. Again.
Ch. 20 Responding to the Call
Ch. 21 In Sickness
Ch. 22 Shock and No Awe
Ch. 23 Refound Pain
Ch. 24 Playtime Cut Short
Ch. 25 Explanations
Ch. 26 Time Lapse
Ch. 27 Elegance
Ch. 28 Another surprise
Ch. 29 Bad News and Some Good
Ch. 30 Trust and Training
Ch. 31 Special Plans
Ch. 32 Supernatural War
Ch. 33 Devestation
Ch. 34 Realm of Darkness
Ch. 35 Judgement Day
Ch. 37 Important.

Comments

 
Tea Sunday, 14 February 2016
Faye is a girl and Dakotah is a by right? I suppose i am a little stupid XD
 
Tea Sunday, 14 February 2016
So i just need somthing clarified. You get to know what all the characters "think" in this story? Just wondering... I am just a littlee confused! BUT i am really hooked on this!!!!
Ka hona Tuesday, 29 January 2013
not to be rude but i think the middle to the end of chapter 33 and all of 34 was a little rushed. Plus we didn't get 2 c Faye's kick-ass powers!! :)
 
Eddie Cruz Sunday, 18 November 2012
The story was good. The angel should have been more angelic like, but overall it was a good story to read.
Frozen Fire Friday, 9 December 2011
Now an Angel is playing Call of Duty?!

HAHAHA I love your writing!

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