Dead
GenreHorror / Thriller
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Saturday, 30 April 2011
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(2 ratings)
Read by:333 different readers
 

I wish my dad came through the door. My dad made me feel safe. I loved my mother, but I couldnít do what had to be done. I stared at my mom, remembering her face. Flashing back to memories. Of when we lived on the beach in North Carolina. Cold winters, humid summers, the way she loved it. Now though, we lived in New York, and I went to High School, with people I didnít know. Not the way I loved it. My dad loved it here, he was always bragging to our family in North Carolina that New York was the best, but I thought it wasnít. The only noise you hear at night, is the belligerent honking of horns, cries of young women getting raped, and the signs buzzing. I hate the signs buzzing; it makes me feel unsafe, like it builds up with extreme energy, and may just explode.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Begin
Ch. 2 Her
Ch. 3 Gone
Ch. 4 Gas Station Luck
Ch. 5 Roscoe Jo
Ch. 6 Rabbitt's Foot
Ch. 7 Illegal Substance
Ch. 8 High
Ch. 9 Attack of the Dead
Ch. 10 Home, sweet home.
Ch. 11 Love's dead.

Comments

 
Jake Connors Friday, 2 May 2014
Wow this was very intriguing i very much enjoyed this story:) keep up the awesome writing. I hope when you have the time you can look my beyond this point and give me tips and advice on what to do since your a great writer:) and make a rating that you think best fits. But this really made me where i didnt wanna move out of my seat, keep it up and thank you:)
 
Jake Connors Sunday, 20 April 2014
Wow ill have to say my friend that was an intense story, like had me going in my seat the whole time. Awesome story:) i hope when you have the time you will look at my new story beyond this point. Please leave me tips and advice on what you think. I would love to get your feed back and rating and hear your advice. Other then that very good story. Keep up the good writing.:)
 
MeghanXMurder Wednesday, 28 December 2011
Good story! Helpfful hint** :) Put indentations more it helps guid the readers eyes to want to read more :)
 
MeghanXMurder Wednesday, 28 December 2011
Good story! Helpfful hint** :) Put indentations more it helps guid the readers eyes to want to read more :)
D.Evers Saturday, 24 September 2011
Good story. I was engaged through the whole thing. Wonder what happens though to to the kids.

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