Secret Storm
GenreRomance / Fiction
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Monday, 4 April 2011
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(8 ratings)
Read by:829 different readers
 

“I want to let you in, Jack, but I…. Oh hell, I just want you. I know you’re not what I need, but I don’t care. Take me to bed now and we’ll sort the rest out later.”
The last thing Sara Jensen needs is another risky relationship. She wants Jack, but she’s been hurt too many times to trust him even though he’s more than a friend. Jack won’t trust her, and that hurts more than her ex’s betrayal.
Jack Wheeler wants Sara. His long denied lust burns barely contained. But a dangerous secret comes back to haunt him, a secret so horrible he can’t trust anyone with it, not even the woman he desires more than anything.
For the first time since they met, they’re both available, but the timing couldn’t be worse. Sara’s not too eager to trust a man again, and Jack refuses to reveal his secret. Getting involved now is complicated, but Sara and Jack have waited long enough. Neither one of them can control their desires. But there’s a storm approaching, and as hard as she tries, Sara can’t run away from Jack’s past. Jack won’t accept her help, and Sara doesn’t know how long she can wait for him to realize he needs her.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Chapter One
Ch. 2 Chapter Two
Ch. 3 Chapter Three

Comments

 
hopeless_ Friday, 18 October 2013
More please?>
 
Cassandra Friday, 12 August 2011
Wow, wow, wow, I can't wait for more of this, update soon please!
 
WordLover Tuesday, 5 July 2011
I'm just about dying to know his secret!
 
WordLover Tuesday, 5 July 2011
I love the internal voices that Jack and Sara each have, so even though this is 3rd person, you sometimes still get a little 1st person vibe, and the writing is not so detached from the character's true feelings. I would love to hear your comments on my writing. Would you mind checking out my book, Springs Awakening?
 
WordLover Monday, 4 July 2011
Sounds so professional and ready for publishing! I love the dialogue. It sounds natural, and there is some wit in there, too. The descriptions are great, and not too much is given away in the first chapter. Wonderful!

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