An Ancient Force
GenreYoung Adult / Suspense
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Thursday, 30 April 2009
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(6 ratings)
Read by:232 different readers
 

Ravyn is A Hunter from the night force sent on the most difficult task of finding Aeolos, an Ancient on the enemy side.

Erelah is a human, adopted into the Night Force because of her lover, the leader of the night force and Ancient, Keane.

They're completely oposite, but are thrown together unexpectedly to save the people they love.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 0 Prologue
Ch. 1 The Hunter's Return
Ch. 2 Babysitting
Ch. 3 Beginnings
Ch. 4 Complications
Ch. 5 Breaking the Broken
Ch. 6 Whispers

Comments

glitterdust101 Monday, 15 February 2010
amazing,i love it!
glitterdust101 Monday, 15 February 2010
its really good,keep up the great work!!!!
 
magicalwriter16 Friday, 12 February 2010
I like it, yes it is very very good I love the fact that when I am reading it it feels as if I am there.. It's descriptive and intriging. Thanks for reading mine! keep up the great work!
 
E. Yazykova Wednesday, 27 January 2010
You describe your characters really well, you show (not tell, which seems to be all the craze on this website, the dialogue is lively and believable. In short, I would've never guessed this book is not published if I was reading it anywhere else. Kudos.
 
E. Yazykova Wednesday, 27 January 2010
Very interesting, and at last - a prologue that works. I really like the character of the boy... very descriptive and disturbing

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