Violet Reed: Book One: Bleeding Violet
GenreSuspense / Drama
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Friday, 4 March 2011
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Read by:426 different readers
 

Romeo, the nickname he earned in kindergarten, has just witnessed a new girl move in across the street named Violet.
She's beautiful, but abused, and worse.
Can Romeo save Violet from her abusive older guardian? If anyone finds out, he'll kill her, but he's killing her now! Secret meetings and eventually a first kiss have let this ironic pair to have feelings for eachother, will they be discovered? Will they be killed? A suspenseful, sad, and terrifing story of love and protecting the ones you care about.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 0 Preface
Ch. 1 Chapter One
Ch. 2 Chapter Two
Ch. 3 Chapter Three
Ch. 4 Chapter Four
Ch. 5 Chapter Five- Part One
Ch. 5 Chapter Five-Part Two
Ch. 6 Chapter Six
Ch. 7 Chapter Seven
Ch. 8 Chapter Eight
Ch. 9 Chapter Nine- Part One
Ch. 9 Chapter Nine-Part Two
Ch. 10 Chapter Ten
Ch. 11 Chapter Eleven (sorry it's so short)
Ch. 12 Chapter Twelve
Ch. 13 Chapter Thirteen

Comments

UndeadBeauty Friday, 11 March 2011
wow, you guys are TOTALLY RIGHT! I completely blew off that part, (Thx E.M Warner!) at first, it was supposed their dad, and Violet had a brother, but I changed my mind and forgot to alter everything else. sorry.
I'm going to change that as soon as I have more time.
And looking back, I can see how it's going fast, I appreciate they you were all like- "No offense" and were nice. Thanks. I've had a LOT of other authors write mean comments. I'm thinking of lengthening the chapters a bit.
One of my other friends thinks it's kinda corny how Violets Birth name is Juliet, and Kristoffer's nickname is Romeo, should I change that? He only calls her by that name once. (She hates it THAT much...)
Thanks for the nice comments and gentle advise. I appreciate it. :)
 
E.M. Wheeler Tuesday, 8 March 2011
this chapter really confused me. in chapter one you say Romeo and violet's mom are talking but in this chapter you say she died and her dad walked out. which is itɪ? i like the plot line w/ her mom dying and dad walking out makes itɪ a bit different. now i thought her and her brother were twins which obviously means there both fourteen. someone that's fourteen can't take custody. my suggestion is instead of saying their twins have Romeo see violet and her older brother who looked around _____ years old. if you want to keep it in w/ the mom's talkin that's fine i'd just write a chapter about her death/funeral. again i'm not trying to be mean w/ this comment i just wanna help out and give suggestions. when i get on my computer instead of my phone. i do plan on giving you a five star rating
 
E.M. Wheeler Tuesday, 8 March 2011
you have a talent for writing but i think you should slow down the pace just a bit. i think its going a tad too fast. please don't take this comment the wrong way. i'm not trying to be mean or anything. i doɪ love your storyline and the description is what caught my attention to your book.

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