A Brothers Revenge
GenreAdult / Drama
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Tuesday, 28 April 2009
Star rating:
 
(4 ratings)
Read by:388 different readers
 

A shot that starts a feud in mobile streets that will dismiss lies, discharge cheaters, and bring dark secrets into the light when an ex-hit mans brother is killed and begins a quest to find his love ones killer in the mean streets of Mobile, Al.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Dreadful Night
Ch. 2 Not Knowing
Ch. 3 Island Boy Funeral
Ch. 4 Deception
Ch. 5 Building an Empire
Ch. 6 Change at Management
Ch. 7 Coming Back Home
Ch. 8 Set up
Ch. 9 Blood Shed
Ch. 10 " Let's finish this "

Comments

 
Phillip O'Sullivan Friday, 2 December 2016
Desperately needing paragraphs- but like the shere weight of words and the ambition that goes with it. Well done!
 
Charley Fletcher Sunday, 21 March 2010
it's ok I like it!

check out mine please? twisted nursery rhymes
 
A secret never to be told Tuesday, 5 May 2009
hey right now it doesnt feel like a story more like a script.
I think you should change the tence as its tricky to write in the present.
 
paul schoaff Tuesday, 28 April 2009
ok, it seems to be the outline of a book. Why don't you write it and then I'll give you some real comments and possibly, an improved rating.

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