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GenreAdventure / Young Adult
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Wednesday, 2 March 2011
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(3 ratings)
Read by: different reader
 

Lanessa thought it would be the best summer vacation ever. Her father, a successful lawyer, had bought her a 25 foot Coronado as a graduation gift. The perfect sailboat. It was small enough that she could handle it herself, but it was big enough to bring her friends on board for a little partying in the bay once school was out.

But her father has made a few enemies and Lanessa has been targeted.

Kidnapped and terrorized by the men who want her father's money, Lanessa has to find a way to escape on her own. Because there's only so much her father can do, and they have no intention of letting her go.

 

Comments

 
Macy Mason Tuesday, 21 February 2012
this is so good! I love it!
 
S. Petruchio Sunday, 13 November 2011
Hi, I always try to review someone once they've reviewed me. Sorry I didn't have more time today or I would have read something longer. This is really good, very intriging and I like your style. You don't waste any time getting into your plot but it's still clear. You're grammar is perfect (or it seems that way to me, but my grammar is not so great so I could have missed things) and I really enjoy your descriptions, they paint a picture and create atmosphere without dragging. Good work and when I have more time I'll check out something else!
 
bittersweet Tuesday, 29 March 2011
This is a great story. :) Very intriguing.

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