Caged & Alone
GenreYoung Adult / Self-help
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Sunday, 27 February 2011
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Carmen had a difficult childhood. She was not accepted by her family, classmates, and friends. Her teachers despised her because she was hard to manage. She had gone from a hyper dramatic 6 year old to a depressed and insecure preteen. All Carmen wants is to be accepted, to become “good”. Carmen is an outcast at her school. At her strict private school Carmen finds it hard to break free of the chains that bind her and become the person she had always wanted to be.

~ My Diary Written in 3rd Person ☮ ♥ ~

1st person is used in the "summer diary",dont get confused!

I WOULD LOVE TO HEAR WHAT YOU THINK OF MY STORY! :)

 

List of chapters

Ch. 0 ♥ STARTING QUOTE ♥
Ch. 1 Preschool & Grade 1
Ch. 2 Grade 2 & Grade 3
Ch. 3 Grade 4 & Grade 5
Ch. 4 Grade 6 & Grade 7
Ch. 5 Grade 8
Ch. 6 Summer Diary: Camp
Ch. 7 Summer Diary: Camp: Bunk Mates
Ch. 8 Summer Diary: Camp: Other Campers
Ch. 9 Summer Diary: Camp: Extra
Ch. 10 Summer Diary: After Camp
Ch. 11 Summer Diary: Camp : Afterword
Ch. 12 Afterword

Comments

 
Ka hona Tuesday, 5 February 2013
i think you should write it in carmens perspective and add mor detail.
not 2 b mean but it is just constructive criticism.
 
ShaqD Friday, 4 March 2011
I like this a lot simply because you are telling the hard truth about your life and it's a big reality for many young people today who have problems with their confidence and self esteem. The best part about this story is it's message.
C.J. DeLange Thursday, 3 March 2011
I think you should write in the third person and give yourself a name. That way it becomes more interesting. Now it's like reading some ones diary. (which it is.)

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