The Body in the Bed: My Version
GenreHorror / Short Stories
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Monday, 24 January 2011
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(4 ratings)
Read by:147 different readers
 

"Lets get the smell out of here." He told the staff.
After two hours of cleaning they had the entire room scrubbed down with the strongest cleaning products they had and the smell still wasn't gone. They had cleaned the carpets, windows, and walls. They took down the curtains and hung new ones.
The manager just didn't get it. The room still had the horrible stench in it. The only place left to clean was the mattresses. The couple was just walking in when the manager decided maybe changing out the mattresses would help.
John helped him lift the top mattress. They backed up horror when they found something under it laying in the carved out box spring.

This is just the retelling of a urban legend I just read called The body In the Bed but I'm giving it my own twist that hopefully makes it creepier than the original.

I wasn't sure what to rate it so if you disagree feel free to tell me. Enjoy!

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 The Body in the Bed
Ch. 2 Rewrite of The Body in the Bed

Comments

 
wheeler28 Thursday, 4 April 2013
Way creepy.
 
~bluebird~ Tuesday, 17 May 2011
There were a few errors but this was still good. I found it very creepy.
 
Love2Read Sunday, 6 February 2011
It's almost one o' clock in the morning and I'm freaking out! I think I'm going to pee in my pants any second...You missed couple things like adding periods, commas, and quotation marks. You'll easily find them if you read this out loud.
 
mgarfield Wednesday, 2 February 2011
This is really creepy.

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