Dear God, Help Me
GenrePoetry / Spiritual
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Sunday, 9 January 2011
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Read by:412 different readers
 

I became a cheater, a liar, a player, and the one girl who has my heart hates me. I guess that's understandable. So here's my travelling out of the dating world. Dear God, watch over me.

If I were an Eminem album,
This would be my "Recovery".
This is my negative poetry,
As you may well see.
Not all of it is negative,
But it is all about me.
I hope you enjoy this, you see,
I just wish that everyone
Could finally forget about me.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 The Toughest Skin
Ch. 2 How Appropriate
Ch. 3 This Wicked Game
Ch. 4 Biographical Change
Ch. 5 Dear God
Ch. 6 I Wept
Ch. 7 Endurance (Exercise Poem)
Ch. 8 Asphyxiated
Ch. 9 Wouldn't You Hate Me, Too?
Ch. 10 Memory Of Someone As Bad As Me
Ch. 11 Playing That Game
Ch. 12 Dagger
Ch. 13 If You Love Me, Hurt Me
Ch. 14 Remember Eeeee
Ch. 15 Waves
Ch. 16 Wave Circle
Ch. 17 Why?
Ch. 18 No, No, No . . .
Ch. 19 One
Ch. 20 Hate
Ch. 21 False Profit
Ch. 22 My Puppet
Ch. 23 Gone Fishing
Ch. 24 Yes, I'm Evil!
Ch. 25 A-Inspired
Ch. 26 Love's Crazy Rant
Ch. 27 Kellsie Remnants
Ch. 28 Just Another Face
Ch. 29 A Little More Than Friends
Ch. 30 Are You Alone?
Ch. 31 Colored
Ch. 32 Medications
Ch. 33 Delusions
Ch. 34 Black And White Photograph
Ch. 35 Decay
Ch. 36 Wounds
Ch. 37 Thinking About You
Ch. 38 The Game You Play
Ch. 39 Ouch
Ch. 40 If She Dies Tonight Part I: You're All Gonna Die
Ch. 41 If She Dies Tonight Part II: The Family Of The Dead
Ch. 42 Voiced Words: Is That Your Voice?
Ch. 43 Bad News
Ch. 44 For What Is Heartbreak Without A Woman?
Ch. 45 If I'm Still Breathing, Just Put Me Out Of My Misery

Comments

 
Bartimeaus Wednesday, 15 May 2013
Dude..i don't want to comment on how you fell.nobody understands that better than you right?So your poems huh?pretty good.This is some serious stuff here. Definitely worthy of publishing..
 
Eddie Cruz Sunday, 18 November 2012
The important thing is you are still breathing. Sometimes life throws us curveball, but with God, all things are possible. Good poems.
 
Karl Thompson Monday, 9 April 2012
I can really relate to you on some of your poems. I have been in your situation and you have a way of putting the pain onto paper. Really well done. I would definately buy this if it ever got published.
Keep up the good work :)
 
NightlyCreature Saturday, 10 December 2011
Unfortunately, I only read one of your poems since I ran out of time being able to read all of your poems... Being stuck with problems like this can be tough, and I hope you get through them soon. I know you're not religious, but keep this in mind. "He heals the brokenhearted and binds up their wounds." Psalm 147:3... it's my favorite scripture.
Neil Evans Friday, 4 February 2011
Daniel,
While I greatly appreciate your comment, I'm not religious and will not turn to a religion such as Christianity for my problems. I do not judge you for believing in Jesus, but I'm not going to turn that way. I pin my problems solely on myself, not on any god or deity.
Neil Evans

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