Vampire Bats
GenreFantasy / Romance
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Sunday, 9 January 2011
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(3 ratings)
Read by:178 different readers
 

I never thought my life would become a lot more complicated.
I never thought this time would come, when nothing would be left in me but the past.
Past that turns to memories. Memories that would means everything to me, my life, my identity.
To remember how my life is when Iím still the mortal I used to know. It hurts when the person you trusted most would also be the one who would break your heart, the one who would break your trust.
He told me that he loves me and that everything will be okay, but he makes it sounds like a curse.
A curse that I would freely accept for him.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Prolouge
Ch. 2 First appearance
Ch. 3 Rescued
Ch. 4 Pendant

Comments

 
Minstrel Mikz Monday, 24 January 2011
this is a good story,though there are some mispelled words and wrong grammar the concept of the story is good.i would like to read more stories from the author of this story.
 
SingItForTheWorld Monday, 17 January 2011
Very good! This has alot of potential, and is in the makings to a great story. There are alot of gramatical errors like capitalisation, punctuation, and spelling, but those can be fixed when you edit. Also, you tend to write the same words again in the same sentence, which makes it a bit repetitive. Overall, I think that it is very good and you can go far with this!
If you have time, can you read/rate my book flashback? Thanks in advance!

~T
 
Shazza Sunday, 9 January 2011
I love this!!! Apart from a few errors it's fantastic!! Well Done and please write more!
BTW thanks for the comment on my book :)

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