taken by the best
GenreSci-Fi / Sci-Fi
Age Rating:PG
Submitted:Sunday, 19 April 2009
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(6 ratings)
Read by:385 different readers
 

this may sould like a typical romance till you meet the vampire.july has been taken by the best most killing vampire...whose trapped her and may want more than just her blood. and it may even lead to romance...

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 deadly confusion
Ch. 2 schools a drag to the funeral
Ch. 3 spyeing the bite
Ch. 4 the vampire
Ch. 5 vampire+human=weird
Ch. 6 love?
Ch. 7 "where are you!?!"

Comments

cookiemunster Friday, 8 October 2010
It's kind of eye catching to me because of the beginning. you should make it more visible i mean like work on your spelling a bit more and then look at it and think of more things to put in it. Let your mind fill with alot of ideas. BE creative
 
ToruLightStar Friday, 21 May 2010
Okay, I was confused when I read this the first time, so I read it a second time and finally understood. This is very good. Please dont listen to what people say, you dont need to improve it unless you want to, just write for the fun of it. That what I do. ^_^

PS: Please read "The Silver Dragon" or "Letters to Dad"
Thanx
mercy_sos Sunday, 14 February 2010
Chapter 7 doesn't make sense you need to improve it otherwise it is a really good book

mercy_sos Saturday, 9 January 2010
this doesn't make sense this whole chapter
 
Eliza Blake Saturday, 20 June 2009
It's not very good. You're only 12, so keep writing to hone your writing skills, but don't expect this to get published.
Sorry, I couldn't even get past the 1st paragraph.

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