Diary Of The Mind
GenreThriller / Fiction
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Saturday, 18 April 2009
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(2 ratings)
Read by:252 different readers
 

It's about a 15 year old teenage boy who's having trouble coping with his school life and personal life. He writes events into his diary ,to which he always starts off, "The One I Trust". He eventually has enough and vows revenge on everyone, who has caused him pain. He plans his revenge and begins with his father. He gets more extreme with each revenge until his life starts to crumble all around him.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Missing Days
Ch. 2 A Friendship Destroyed
Ch. 3 The One I Trust
Ch. 4 A Father's Touch
Ch. 5 St. Micheal's Community Hospital
Ch. 6 The Divorce
Ch. 7 Midnight Revenge
Ch. 8 An Uncontrollable Feeling
Ch. 9 Kodi's Last Thought

Comments

Wolf (ess) of the Wilds Thursday, 17 September 2009
WRIIIIIIIIIITEEEEEEE MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEE
PLLLLZ I BEG OF YOU!
 
Mary-Annalee DiGiovanni Monday, 20 April 2009
i few spellign and grammar errors, but i found this a really pleasant read :)
A secret never to be told Monday, 20 April 2009
hey i have just read up to chapter 5 and i think the idea of your story is really good and how you end some of the chapters on cliffhangers. I will deffinetly read some more, but so far its lookin good.
Sc3arlett Sketch Saturday, 18 April 2009
i think u need to make this story more realistic. besides, its going a little too fast and when he writes his diary, it should be with more feeling. b/c it sounds like a bad actor said it.

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