Sorry To Keep You Waiting
GenreMystery / Crime
Age Rating:PG
Submitted:Monday, 25 October 2010
Star rating:
 
(3 ratings)
Read by:88 different readers
 

Lizzie has kept silent for three years. She's gone to counseling and all her counselors told her father she "wasn't worth fixing". With her dad working on the Murder Squad, and the secret of her mother's death hidden to all except her, will one more murder make a difference?

This is a new idea. I've never done a murder mystery or anything like this at all. I'd love any support I can get. Thanks to all who have helped me with all my other random ideas. And I'll let you know, there's a lot of them. This would be one. And I hope I can make a good story out of it.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 the detective's daughter
Ch. 2 the bus ride
Ch. 3 meeting shanna
Ch. 4 be alone, always alone

Comments

 
Aquatic sand Thursday, 1 September 2011
i loved the idea it reminds me with single laides song but sorry for giving you 4 stars this girl burned my patience and my blood! she is such a courd!!!! please make any changes iam going to die, i suggest make it a fantasy change if the story doesnt have a fantasy part than its ok JUST CHANGE HER STUATION!!!! put some feelings in the story
please read my stories and sent me back
1-ega and the life of raider
2-the monster of april
 
Short 'N' Sweet Wednesday, 10 November 2010
Awesome writing!! I'm so glad Rissa told me about this. :D You're a very talented writer and I'm adding this to my faves. :D
 
. Sunday, 7 November 2010
This is cool. :D Very well wrote, and something completely different to what I usually read. Keep writing, I'll still be reading. :)

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