Asylum Seekers
GenreNon Fiction / Education
Age Rating:G
Submitted:Saturday, 4 April 2009
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(4 ratings)
Read by:1569 different readers
 

In today's media often asylum seekers and refugees are portrayed as bad people and some of the stories are often untrue and exaggerated.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Refugees
Ch. 2 Diary of an Asylum Seeker

Comments

 
Kimota Friday, 19 June 2009
Nixon. This was a very good piece of writing, but you could put more thought into paragraphs. Als its learned not learn't. Learn't is an abreviation of learned it. But overall the general idea was good. And the writing.
 
The ink blotter Sunday, 31 May 2009
 
The ink blotter Monday, 20 April 2009
I apologize for my earlier comment i was just a bit upset because asylum seekers are not always treated like you describe and i have a very good friend who happens to be an asylu seeker so once again i apologize for my earlier comments but i still feel it is a little jumpled but isn't too bad i rated it 3/5
 
Jack B. Nimble Saturday, 18 April 2009
Hmmm.This is not a jumbled as I thought it would be. I read that other comment by ink blotter and i was shocked to see that, that was said.
Only ink blotter is nice :) but they failed to give you constructive critism.
I think this, if worked on more can be a very promosing paragraph about refugees. :)
I gave you 3 out of 5 stars. Becasue it's not bad, but it still needs work.
 
The ink blotter Tuesday, 14 April 2009
I wasn't the one that rated this a half star i may have left a comment but i didn't rate this a half star

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