The Daughter of Death
GenreYoung Adult
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Friday, 3 September 2010
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(6 ratings)
Read by:278 different readers
 

Ever since birth, Roxy has appraised the mystery of her strange necklace: a sterling rose wrapping a skull.She's also wondered why she sees the ghost of a man following her around. She was hoping for a simple explanation such as "Your biological father is protecting you." Not that the angel of death observed her every move.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 0 Prologue-The Four Great Beauties
Ch. 1 Chapter 1-A Dreaded Meeting
Ch. 2 Chapter 2-Arising Loved Ones

Comments

 
Aliensal Tuesday, 5 October 2010
Very good indeed, I love how the dialouge flows easily. Keep it up =]
 
Amitava Manna Monday, 13 September 2010
Good start indeed. The plot suggests gradual build up of climax and speed. Seems a good story in the making.
 
Polaris Zark Monday, 13 September 2010
That was well written with few grammar mistakes. Also a good story. I've asked the website to notify me when a new chapter is published. This certainly is worthy of publishing. Thing is, you need to explain the girls age. At first, I was imagining 6, but at the end of the chapter, 16.
 
Sandra Andover Monday, 13 September 2010
This was very good. It was very well written and I enjoyed the action. I liked the mysterious vibe you have around Ethan. Very cool.

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Black Whispers Monday, 13 September 2010
i agree with stella :D totally..except about the vampire thing haha :) i'm goin to read more later... :)

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