The Time Traveler's Glass
GenreSci-Fi / Fantasy
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Thursday, 2 September 2010
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Read by:203 different readers
 

King and Reno Royals are the only ones who can see their father's past. They end up back in time to the very day their parents were killed. Reno, desperate to see her parents, intervenes. But changing the past has major consequences on the future. By saving the occupants of the building from the fire, Pandora, a future-seeker, as they are commonly known, constructs a prophecy- one that will change King and Reno's lives forever. In this tale of evil, adventure, loss, and discovery, the Royals have to face a life they accidentally created for themselves. One they wish they never had to be a part of.

Message me if you have a better idea for the title, I'm stuck! Or if you like the title, just leave it in your comment please! Thank you!!!

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Meeting in the Night
Ch. 2 A Dangerous Task
Ch. 3 A Close Call

Comments

 
SingItForTheWorld Saturday, 16 October 2010
This is great so far!! i love the suspence. to the next chapter!!
 
Jessica Daniels Tuesday, 7 September 2010
This is great!
so orginal, i hope you continue with it ^^
Julia R. West Sunday, 5 September 2010
Rissa-
Oop! I guess I missed that when editing. I'll change it and thanks for pointing it out! I'm copying and pasting this from my microsoft word, so that might make a few problems too. Thanks!
 
. Saturday, 4 September 2010
That's pretty good, can't wait for more and there was only one place where you missed out on punctuation.

'"What makes you think I would? Artemis questioned.' Should be '"What makes you think I would?" Artemis questioned.

Apart from that there's nothing wrong with it and I can't wait to read more. This is definitely being featured in 'A Must Read'. :)

Rissa.
 
Maddiee*xo Friday, 3 September 2010
Wow! this chapter has already got me so hooked! it's really really good, i really enjoyed reading it!
Please keep posting more, i love it! <3
~ Maddiee*xo

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