Brookville Creek
GenreDrama / Romance
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Saturday, 7 August 2010
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Read by:228 different readers
 

If Taylor could have picked where she wanted to spend her summer, it would have been at home in Baitwater, Louisiana. She would have spent the days by the marshes and the nights under the stars, but her mom had different plans. She sends her to live with her midwestern cousins in Brookville Creek, Kansas.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Chapter 1
Ch. 2 Chapter 2
Ch. 3 Chapter 3
Ch. 4 Chapter 4
Ch. 5 Chapter 5
Ch. 6 Chapter 6
Ch. 7 Chapter 7
Ch. 8 Chapter 8
Ch. 9 Chapter 9
Ch. 10 Chapter 10
Ch. 11 Chapter 11
Ch. 12 PART 2
Ch. 13 Chapter 13
Ch. 14 Chapter 14
Ch. 15 Chapter 15

Comments

 
Nicole Reed Sunday, 8 August 2010
It's a short chapter, but so far I like it. You could add a little bit of emotion to this though, instead of just something like: "What?" asked Taylor, heartbroken. Show instead of telling(; Anyway, I'm interested to see where this could be going once she's gotten to her Aunt's.

Would you mind checking out my book, I'd really appreciate it?
 
Yanks1113 Saturday, 7 August 2010
That sounds very interesting. You're a really good writer!

please read mine?

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