Memories (Completed)
GenreSci-Fi / Fiction
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Wednesday, 4 August 2010
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(4 ratings)
Read by:1225 different readers
 

All Lumex Cockcrow has ever wanted is to live a quiet and peaceful life alone. All her aspirations change when she meets James, a dashing young man that holds a million secrets. Lumex finds herself falling quickly in love with the mystery man. However, there is more to James than meets the eye. More than Lumex would have ever imagined. And now, she finds herself learning things about herself that are even more amazing than what the mystery that is James is.
With all the secrets revealed, an old threat is exposed. Dangerous people are rising from the grave once more to assure their evil rule. Only this time there is someone who can fight for what is truly good in this world.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 0 Characters
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Ch. 2 2
Ch. 3 3
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Ch. 5 5
Ch. 6 6
Ch. 7 7
Ch. 8 8
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Ch. 10 10
Ch. 11 11
Ch. 12 12
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Ch. 14 14
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Ch. 16 16
Ch. 17 17
Ch. 17 17
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Ch. 24 24
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Comments

 
B.N.F Monday, 23 May 2016
This story is amazing so far! Can't wait to read the rest of it!
 
Equinox1122 Monday, 30 January 2012
this book is so awesome, i was addicted from the first chapter. :)
MiseryRose Friday, 18 February 2011
OMG! This book is amazing! I absolutely loved it the whole time I was reading it. Though there are a few minor errors like the others said that the story could use without. If she weighed that much, then she'd be anorexic to the point where her bones would be poking out her skin. 110 pounds would be a little better if you dont want her to sound fat.


The other thing is her temperature. 112 degrees is way too high for her. If she did, she would be on the edge of death. I'm pretty sure that she would be hallucinating by then also and would have to bathe in ice to get her temp down.

Overall, awesome story. I LOVED it and I hope more readers come to check it out. I cant rate it cuz my cell wont let me, but I'll try ASAP to get on that. You should do a sequal on Lemux finding the other thing a ma jig. Sorry, dont remember the name. X] If you dont mind, could you check out my book Dreams and give me some advice? I'd really appreciate it! Please and thank you if you do.
 
HayHay18 Sunday, 8 August 2010
This story was really good and I actually wanted to know what would happen to the characters. It isn't perfect but I'm sure with more experience and re-editing it'll be amazing. Two things you really need to fix: One, her weight it's super unhealthy for a girl her height to weigh so little. It's not very believable for her to weigh 89 lbs. Second, her age. Humans haven't been around for millions of years so it makes it really hard to believe.
 
defenestrateme46 Sunday, 8 August 2010
I have one piece of constructive criticism. With a temperature of 110.3, the nurse would be calling an ambulance, not sending her home. I'd recomend lowering to around 102ish, at least while she's in the nurses office. It was always rise to 110 lator in the story.

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