Coming Home
GenreShort Stories / Travel
Age Rating:G
Submitted:Tuesday, 20 July 2010
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Read by:174 different readers
 

Coming Home is a short first person account of the rather depressing and anxious view the narrator has on life, love, friendship and society

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Coming Home

Comments

 
Love2Read Wednesday, 21 July 2010
You have a very nice way of writing! Please continue! <3

~M
Blip! Tuesday, 20 July 2010
That's nice. I like your use of repetition at the start where you use half a lot it gives a sens Ed monotony. However maybe because it is depression you could use more heavy morose descriptive words. Other than that there weren't many problems. Well done.

Could you check out a little of ONCE if you have the time you don't have to read all.
 
J Forrest Wellman Tuesday, 20 July 2010
Good writing. Keep up the good work..

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