UpSyndrome Vol.1
GenreLiterary Fiction / Humour
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Monday, 12 July 2010
Star rating:
 
(2 ratings)
Read by:403 different readers
 

A satirical look at social order through a phantasmagorical narrative that brings the reader through the grim landscape of our contemporary society.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Prologus: Ctrl Alt Del
Ch. 2 Rat//Race
Ch. 3 Don't Walk
Ch. 4 I ♥ POPE
Ch. 5 The Wank Booths
Ch. 6 The Wig of Lies
Ch. 7 Travelator
Ch. 8 Epilogus: F5

Comments

 
janiemc Wednesday, 14 July 2010
This is the most mind blowing book I've ever read.

You're either some kind of genius or some kind of mad man, or perhaps the thing that lingers between the fracture of the two.
stormy no-one Monday, 12 July 2010
Kudos for using "prologus."

The first paragraph is wonderful. I could hear the voice in my head, smooth and fluid. Great narration.

Obese Brother? Genius.

Love love looooove the string of events. Thought-provoking, unconventional, and great attention hooks. This is more like poetry than narration.

The description is amazing and the charming wordplay really glues the idea together. Sometimes, though, you tend to be just a little too wordy. In places, I found myself focusing more on the words themselves, rather than what the words were saying.

The grammar isn't perfect, but it's good. Look out for the comma vs. semicolon monster.

I'm definitely reading on.
 
Capitalletters Monday, 12 July 2010
This is very well written. Well done on that. Your grammar and paragraphing is more or less perfect. Keep it up. Mind reading mine? Thanks :- )

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