Teagan
GenreLiterary Fiction
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Monday, 7 June 2010
Star rating:
 
(7 ratings)
Read by:272 different readers
 

When Teagan met James Caldwell, she thought him to be rude, arrogant, and tactless - and when he offended her and suddenly had the audacity to ask her out on a date, she couldn't figure out what kind of idiot he was. Somehow, somewhere along the line, they fell in love.

Over time, Teagan changed her outlook on life, the things that she wanted - all because of one boy, someone who introduced her to drugs, alcohol, cigarettes, and a darker world than she had ever known. Now, six months after their break-up, a still-heartbroken girl is trying to find herself and finally get him out of her life, no matter what it takes.

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NOTE: There are currently six chapters and this is still a work-in-progress. I plan on posting more chapters periodically, one at a time, but I don't know if I'll post the whole finished piece. I'm working on getting published. :]

 

List of chapters

Ch. 0 Cover
Ch. 1 Marlboros and Jack Daniel's
Ch. 2 A Rose by Any Other Name
Ch. 3 Dependent
Ch. 4 Chance Encounter
Ch. 5 Pride & Prejudice

Comments

 
Yuna Saturday, 10 November 2012
Your writing is very good, and the plot is realistic. No spelling mistakes, too. :)
I would be glad if you reviewed "Mutual Survival".
 
Unfathomable Monday, 9 May 2011
I appreciate your work. The cadence is really enjoyable. The way the story is woven, the way it moves from the past to the present, is indeed something that lures attention. Awaiting more from you.
 
Elisabeth Heroux Friday, 17 December 2010
Your writing is amazing. I would love it if you read my book and give me some tips on some descriptions that would help me bring my book to life.
The details that you have in this first chapter are absolutely stunning.
nah man Sunday, 20 June 2010
This is very interesting. I like how you describe the whole story. However, I think you should break down some paragraphs so it would be better to read. Otherwise, this is amazing. And I hope Teagan sees the bartender again. I find him intriguing.

Thanks for reading mine!
Beatrix
 
TN Templeton Tuesday, 15 June 2010
I found you here from your LJ and I thought I'm leaving you a comment as promised. ^_^ I think your writing style and form were both fantastic. Though the story's beginning seemed a bit long to get into, by the end of the first chapter it picked up enough for me to read the second as well. Your characters seem very developed and in depth. I would give you a four (don't take it personally, I never give fives to anyone ^_^) for style. A two and a half for the opening. Follow that with another four for characters. Overall, good work. Keep at it.

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