The Lying Eyes
GenreFantasy / Thriller
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Saturday, 15 May 2010
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(4 ratings)
Read by:278 different readers
 

I stumbled through the grey woods, pushing branches out of the way of my face. What am I doing here? I asked myself. A feeling began to rise inside me, it was like panic, or like a feeling of franticly looking from something. My pace picked up and soon I was dashing through the woods, I was panting, gasping for breath, but I couldn't stop.

I wasn't trying to move branches out of the way anymore, the branches now just scraped across my skin, leaving a burning sensation followed by blood. My hair was becoming tangled in branches and my feet were numb, but I wouldn't stop.

And then it hit me, I stopped dead. What am I doing, I asked myself, why am I here? I leaned against a tree for support and caught my breath. I began to rake my hands through my hair, hoping to smooth it so I didn't look like a wild animal, I'm insane, I told myself.

I sat on the ground, placing my back against the tree and resting my head on my knees. The denim of my jeans was faded and worn, I remembered when my mother told me that people used to buy jeans that were torn and faded. They used money to buy old jeans, no wonder the nation had crashed.

"What am I doing?" I wondered out loud, my voice only a whisper.

"Well I think you were looking for me." My head jerked up, alert at once, and I was on my feet backing away. I really did feel like an animal now, with my defensive stance and the danger that I could tell that lurked in my eyes. I had always been slightly ashamed of that edgy look in my eyes, but at the same time, amazed.

He gave the half smile that he had given last time, the smile that I had seen every time my eyes were closed. But at the moment, my eyes were narrowed, my confused feelings pushed aside. He was danger, he could kill people, he probably has killed pepple, I thought.




 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Every Nation Falls
Ch. 2 First Impressions
Ch. 3 Not so "dark ones"
Ch. 4 Living two lives
Ch. 5 Troubled
Ch. 6 Explanations
Ch. 7 Exchanged Conversations
Ch. 8 Dreams, Paintings and Beliefs
Ch. 9 A new perspective
Ch. 10 Another nighttime trip

Comments

 
NinjaShay Thursday, 26 February 2015
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Jake Connors Friday, 2 May 2014
Wow this was very intriguing i very much enjoyed this story:) keep up the awesome writing. I hope when you have the time you can look my beyond this point and give me tips and advice on what to do since your a great writer:) and make a rating that you think best fits. But this really made me where i didnt wanna move out of my seat, keep it up and thank you:)
 
Jake Connors Sunday, 20 April 2014
Wow ill have to say my friend that was an intense story, like this had me going in my seat the whole time. Awesome story so far:) i hope when you have the time you will look at my new story beyond this point. Please leave me tips and advice on what you think. I would love to get your feed back and rating and hear your advice. Other then that very good story. Keep up the good writing.
 
Taylor.Rae Friday, 22 April 2011
This is really good! keep it up! I've gotta read more now lol
 
bellatrix Saturday, 23 October 2010
Loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove it. Add more soon!

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